Friday, June 8, 2018

description of forest

Last week in Te Ngahere we have been learning to write some descriptive writing about the Forest. We weren’t allowed to write I see, I hear, I feel  and I smell. I got told that my writing was like a recount so I had to fix it. To do that I had to change the writing that related to the recount but luckily Ezra helped me with it. I enjoyed it because I love going to the Forest. I think that I have to learn more about not letting people do the work for me.

Monday, May 28, 2018

the visit

Last week on Friday 2 people from bay bush came to tell us what they do in the Ngahere. In the process they taught us a lot of information. Also they presented 4 things. That was a Possum, a Kiwi, a Hedgehog and photos. I enjoyed learning about this because it helped me understand what creatures needed to be safe and which didn’t. Then after the presentation they brought us outside taking us to the field to teach us about rat traps. So far we haven’t been able to get any .  I hope we see them again soon.

Tuesday, March 27, 2018

blog post

Yesterday in Te Ngahere we’ve been learning how to use metaphors and learning not to say I  or because.
I enjoyed making a poem about myself to describe me to other people.
I think I need to learn more about making my writing make sense. It was challenging for me
but what I did well was when I knew what a metaphor was to help me with my poem.   

This is my first draft.

Wednesday, November 29, 2017

ocean conservation

On the day before yesterday we had Libby in Te Ngahere to talk to us about Ocean Conservation. She taught us about the ocean and what creatures live in it.
I thought she was trying to promote to everyone that sea life have to be saved from plastic bags because plastic bags are made of oil and oil isn’t a good thing to eat. She also brought her bike to Te Ngahere and told us information about it and then she wanted us to watch a video of it.

Thursday, November 9, 2017

persuasive writing

A couple of days ago we were writing a persuasive piece for should plastic bags be allowed to be in super markets.
I didn’t agree because it wasn’t good for animals and us.

I’ve done  commas, full stops and capitals at the right places.

Friday, September 15, 2017

just to tell you

I forgot to tell you guys that I'm getting out in one more week but I'm also going for a holiday down hamelton. but don't worry I'll probably this stay their for a couple of days. now that my tubes gone it's cool but one of my nurses gave me a deal. she said I had to drink and eat but now this my soup and milkshakes I also can eat other foods. I also think that everyday (except when I get out) people come in and come with a menu and my jobs to pick what I want. I'll probably get back in the holidays.

Tuesday, September 12, 2017

I'm comming home

"Hi guys good news I'm comming home 1 more week!"
I heard about that you guys sent some cards to make me feel better I - I don't know what to say you guys are the best thank you all so much. they  took out the feeding tube
if you didn't know about my tube
it was a thing that was sticking in my right side of my nose so I can eat and so that I didn't lose weight.  if you think it was anoying believe me it was they had to put the tube by my chin, up my ear and right in my side throat.
"okay better start to eat my dinner see you guys real soon?"
"yes eating food no more liquid food yay!"