description of forest

Last week in Te Ngahere we have been learning to write some descriptive writing about the Forest. We weren’t allowed to write I see, I hear, I feel  and I smell. I got told that my writing was like a recount so I had to fix it. To do that I had to change the writing that related to the recount but luckily Ezra helped me with it. I enjoyed it because I love going to the Forest. I think that I have to learn more about not letting people do the work for me.