writing write and some more writing

Kia Ora everyone, my name’s Katipa and welcome to my blog post.
What I was learning: today I’m going to share with you my explanation writing.
Here’s my DLO.
What I didn’t do well: I didn’t do very good in using passive voice and present tense because I didn’t really understand it.
What I did do well: what I did do well though was making my writing very persuasive.
What I did to fix my writing: I fixed my writing by participating in a group conference, my teacher explained to me what I needed to do.
Reflection: What I’ve learnt from this is even if the writing you’re supposed isn’t your type of liking, you must always use the correct sentence structure for the correct topic.