ocean conservation

On the day before yesterday we had Libby in Te Ngahere to talk to us about Ocean Conservation. She taught us about the ocean and what creatures live in it.

I thought she was trying to promote to everyone that sea life have to be saved from plastic bags because plastic bags are made of oil and oil isn’t a good thing to eat. She also brought her bike to Te Ngahere and told us information about it and then she wanted us to watch a video of it.

persuasive writing

A couple of days ago we were writing a persuasive piece for should plastic bags be allowed to be in super markets.

I didn’t agree because it wasn’t good for animals and us.

I’ve done  commas, full stops and capitals at the right places.